Post by Frost-Thane102 on Dec 13, 2009 0:57:16 GMT -5
This is the prologue for another story which I'm more keen on. Thane, my, character is going to be in this story. Guess which character falls in love with him. Anyway, six characters: Natallia, Nathan, Katherine, Samual, Tally and Kole. Enjoy!
The girl was tall and beautiful with a few feint scars spread across her skin. She had medium length, curly, unruly and very messy brunette hair tied up in a bun behind her head and glowing green eyes with slitted pupils. She was wearing a maroon top and jeans over her slightly tanned skin and was leaning into the engine of an old, rusty ute. Around her neck wore a necklace that had a green feather, an emerald and a piece of flint on it
On the other side of the room a blonde haired man with blue eyes was running over a building design. He was wearing a basic shirt with jeans and his short, spiky hair was ruffled and un-brushed. He had light skin and small yet well defined muscles. He had a piece of strong with a spider’s fang tied around his neck, barely visible against his black shirt.
A pretty, sleek, grey, long-furred cat jumped onto a shelf near the girl and battered a metal nut off it. She jumped down next to it and started battering it around. She pawed it under the car and bounded after it, nearly knocking the girl over.
“Hey Bell!”, she growled cheerfully, “Watch it!”.
“Hey, Natallia”, the boy called out, still looking at the design, ”What’s the time?”.
“Time for lunch”, she said, whipping her hands on an already dirty cloth, “Come in whenever you feel like it”.
She opened the door and left, letting it slam in Bell’s face, who mewed indignantly.
The boy shrugged and went back to work, “So much for that answer”.
Suddenly a scream split the air and his head shot up.
Bell acted instantly, attacking the door in annoyance as he jumped up and slammed it open with his shoulder. He pushed past the cars blocking his path and came to a sudden stop inches away from the door to the main house. That wasn’t there.
A large, black hole had opened in the middle of the floor, sucking the whole house into it.
“Nathan! Help!” , Natallia screeched.
He whipped his head around and saw her clinging to the ground, emerald eyes wide with fright as the hole tried to suck her in.
He bolted over, making just before Bell and grabbed her arms. He pulled her up as she tried to find a foot hole so she could push herself away.
Then suddenly Nathan tripped over absolutely nothing and they both went tumbling into the hole. Bell tried to go after them but it closed up before she could make it. She ran around where it had just been, mewing sadly, tail dropping.
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“Catch me if you can!”, the red haired girl yelled over her shoulders as she tumbled through the grape vines. She was young and pretty with long, straight, bronze red hair and yellow-brown eyes.
Her brother, a taller, older boy was racing after her. He had short, brown hair and brown eyes that were sparkling with laughter.
“Ha-ha! No fair! You got a head start!”, he yelled as she ducked and wound her way across the field.
Her laughter floated up to him and he jumped off a hill, landing next to her as she rushed by. He reached out and grabbed her, pulling her into a tight hug,”You’d think I could get a better a welcome home”.
She giggled and hugged him back, “I missed you Sam. Please don’t leave again”.
“Of course not, now why would I do that Kat?”, he smiled at her, placing her down.
She beamed back at him, then grabbed his hand and starting racing through the fields towards a glistening below them, “Last one in the river is a rotten shell fish!”.
Sam laughed and ran after as wind whipped in his hair. He pelted past her and with a yell jumped into the river with a large splash.
Suddenly there was a gurgle and Sam tried to thrash his way to the surface without any luck.
“Sam!”, Kat screamed and bolted into the river after him.
She spotted him as soon as she entered and she backpedalled fast.
A huge black hole had opened below him and was sucking the both of them into it. Kat tried to scream but didn’t manage to make it to the surface before the hole closed around them
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She pounded her hands against the walls, flung out her leg and smashed it into the other side, ignoring the pain that shot through it. Tears of desperation welled in her eyes as she beat at the walls, at the door, floor and ceiling.
“It’s useless. Stop beating yourself up”, he muttered, leaning against the wall connected to hers.
“Right, sorry”, she said, her voice hoarse and quiet from all her screaming and fighting.
“Don’t apologise”, he replied, standing up and turning to the wall, which he leaned his head against.
“I just....I don’t want...I hate this place”, she stuttered, knowing what a stupid thing it was to say. Knowing he hated it too.
“I know. But we will get. You just have to patient”, he flinched when he heard her hiccup, a sign that she was trying not to cry, ”Calm down Tally. Please, just calm down”.
“Calm, right. Calm”, she said and sat down, folding her legs and taking deep breathes. Suddenly she yelled out as the pain she had been ignoring for so long leaped out again.
The boy gritted his teeth and clenched his fists so hard his nails pierced his skin.
“Kole...” , she gasped quietly, smelling the blood, “How-how long can we keep this up for?”.
He didn’t answer, just started ahead in his cell, considering her question.
“I thought as much”, she whispered, then shut her mouth and closed her eyes. She leaned her hands on her knees like she was about to meditate then thought strongly, willing her thoughts into his mind, Can we speak through walls?
His eyes flicked up to look at the wall and then down again. He had heard her. She knew that much, but he wasn’t replying.
She sighed and curled up, You have to forget. Please, please forget. So that I can too...
She relaxed after that and started to fall into a troubled sleep.
Once he knew she was out he smashed his fists against the wall. Forget?! How was he supposed to forget? There was no forgetting. There never was...
Tally!, his voice split into her mind so loud she nearly screamed in pain. Her eyes shot open and she sat up to see the wall that separated her and Kole had disappeared and so had Kole. Into a giant, black hole.
“Kole!”, she screeched and ran over to the hole. She started into it, then jumped. She didn’t care where it took her. Kole was in it. And at least it was out.
The girl was tall and beautiful with a few feint scars spread across her skin. She had medium length, curly, unruly and very messy brunette hair tied up in a bun behind her head and glowing green eyes with slitted pupils. She was wearing a maroon top and jeans over her slightly tanned skin and was leaning into the engine of an old, rusty ute. Around her neck wore a necklace that had a green feather, an emerald and a piece of flint on it
On the other side of the room a blonde haired man with blue eyes was running over a building design. He was wearing a basic shirt with jeans and his short, spiky hair was ruffled and un-brushed. He had light skin and small yet well defined muscles. He had a piece of strong with a spider’s fang tied around his neck, barely visible against his black shirt.
A pretty, sleek, grey, long-furred cat jumped onto a shelf near the girl and battered a metal nut off it. She jumped down next to it and started battering it around. She pawed it under the car and bounded after it, nearly knocking the girl over.
“Hey Bell!”, she growled cheerfully, “Watch it!”.
“Hey, Natallia”, the boy called out, still looking at the design, ”What’s the time?”.
“Time for lunch”, she said, whipping her hands on an already dirty cloth, “Come in whenever you feel like it”.
She opened the door and left, letting it slam in Bell’s face, who mewed indignantly.
The boy shrugged and went back to work, “So much for that answer”.
Suddenly a scream split the air and his head shot up.
Bell acted instantly, attacking the door in annoyance as he jumped up and slammed it open with his shoulder. He pushed past the cars blocking his path and came to a sudden stop inches away from the door to the main house. That wasn’t there.
A large, black hole had opened in the middle of the floor, sucking the whole house into it.
“Nathan! Help!” , Natallia screeched.
He whipped his head around and saw her clinging to the ground, emerald eyes wide with fright as the hole tried to suck her in.
He bolted over, making just before Bell and grabbed her arms. He pulled her up as she tried to find a foot hole so she could push herself away.
Then suddenly Nathan tripped over absolutely nothing and they both went tumbling into the hole. Bell tried to go after them but it closed up before she could make it. She ran around where it had just been, mewing sadly, tail dropping.
¤¤¤
“Catch me if you can!”, the red haired girl yelled over her shoulders as she tumbled through the grape vines. She was young and pretty with long, straight, bronze red hair and yellow-brown eyes.
Her brother, a taller, older boy was racing after her. He had short, brown hair and brown eyes that were sparkling with laughter.
“Ha-ha! No fair! You got a head start!”, he yelled as she ducked and wound her way across the field.
Her laughter floated up to him and he jumped off a hill, landing next to her as she rushed by. He reached out and grabbed her, pulling her into a tight hug,”You’d think I could get a better a welcome home”.
She giggled and hugged him back, “I missed you Sam. Please don’t leave again”.
“Of course not, now why would I do that Kat?”, he smiled at her, placing her down.
She beamed back at him, then grabbed his hand and starting racing through the fields towards a glistening below them, “Last one in the river is a rotten shell fish!”.
Sam laughed and ran after as wind whipped in his hair. He pelted past her and with a yell jumped into the river with a large splash.
Suddenly there was a gurgle and Sam tried to thrash his way to the surface without any luck.
“Sam!”, Kat screamed and bolted into the river after him.
She spotted him as soon as she entered and she backpedalled fast.
A huge black hole had opened below him and was sucking the both of them into it. Kat tried to scream but didn’t manage to make it to the surface before the hole closed around them
¤¤¤
She pounded her hands against the walls, flung out her leg and smashed it into the other side, ignoring the pain that shot through it. Tears of desperation welled in her eyes as she beat at the walls, at the door, floor and ceiling.
“It’s useless. Stop beating yourself up”, he muttered, leaning against the wall connected to hers.
“Right, sorry”, she said, her voice hoarse and quiet from all her screaming and fighting.
“Don’t apologise”, he replied, standing up and turning to the wall, which he leaned his head against.
“I just....I don’t want...I hate this place”, she stuttered, knowing what a stupid thing it was to say. Knowing he hated it too.
“I know. But we will get. You just have to patient”, he flinched when he heard her hiccup, a sign that she was trying not to cry, ”Calm down Tally. Please, just calm down”.
“Calm, right. Calm”, she said and sat down, folding her legs and taking deep breathes. Suddenly she yelled out as the pain she had been ignoring for so long leaped out again.
The boy gritted his teeth and clenched his fists so hard his nails pierced his skin.
“Kole...” , she gasped quietly, smelling the blood, “How-how long can we keep this up for?”.
He didn’t answer, just started ahead in his cell, considering her question.
“I thought as much”, she whispered, then shut her mouth and closed her eyes. She leaned her hands on her knees like she was about to meditate then thought strongly, willing her thoughts into his mind, Can we speak through walls?
His eyes flicked up to look at the wall and then down again. He had heard her. She knew that much, but he wasn’t replying.
She sighed and curled up, You have to forget. Please, please forget. So that I can too...
She relaxed after that and started to fall into a troubled sleep.
Once he knew she was out he smashed his fists against the wall. Forget?! How was he supposed to forget? There was no forgetting. There never was...
Tally!, his voice split into her mind so loud she nearly screamed in pain. Her eyes shot open and she sat up to see the wall that separated her and Kole had disappeared and so had Kole. Into a giant, black hole.
“Kole!”, she screeched and ran over to the hole. She started into it, then jumped. She didn’t care where it took her. Kole was in it. And at least it was out.