Raine
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Post by Raine on Jun 9, 2008 21:51:31 GMT -5
Everyone wants to be crazy:
They say she belongs in a mad house. In a white padded room; locked up and forced to be quieter than a mouse. So they can watch her day in and day out. To make shure she knows what life's really about. 'To destroy all free thought, replaced with utter respect.' But everyone's truely jealous off her freedom. And they all want her to free them. But now she's gone, crossed over to their side, all creativity squashed, their rules she must abide. And they all murmer about her 'the once crazy girl', they say it's a wonder she's normal. Secrecly they're all remorceful...
Go ahead, play the game, stab me in the back...:
Sick of the game, that all friends play.
You couldn't care less, what I have to say...
You go along with the crowd; go ahead and play the game.
Go ahead...
But don't expect me to be there for you when you're hurt.
I don't need a backstabber friend.
Because I know you were never there for me in the end.
Bullet:
This gun shows the future for two, a bullet for me a bullet for you. As ghosts we'll wander from this day on. Now hury love, it's almost dawn. I'll go first, you seem more scared. Bang! I'm free but where are you? Oh, what should I do? I drift and drift, I don't know where, oh what was I thinking why would you care?
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Post by Jetta on Jun 9, 2008 21:53:45 GMT -5
Aww!! Thats really good! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Raine
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Post by Raine on Jun 9, 2008 21:57:27 GMT -5
Thank you Jehte!!! I don't think they're very good though..... I guess mabey they're better than I thought?
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Post by Jetta on Jun 10, 2008 8:50:42 GMT -5
They are really good! Whenever I try to write a poem it sounds like some pathetic kindergardner slacker, last minute work. Good job!
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Raine
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Post by Raine on Jun 11, 2008 18:33:35 GMT -5
Well thank you very much, nowone has ever complemented my poetry before... Yours can't be that bad...
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Post by Jetta on Jun 11, 2008 20:23:41 GMT -5
I wonder why no one has complemented your poetry? Probably just jelous or something... *cough* my poetry? Yeah... unless I sit for hours it sounds like some idiodic- something.... ^^ but thats fine with me!
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Post by ehran on Jun 13, 2008 10:25:14 GMT -5
those were good, emo sounding but good. lol some people say i'm emo, -_- i like their hair ts awesome \m/
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Post by Jetta on Jun 13, 2008 13:42:24 GMT -5
It did sound sort of emo.... but hey, whatever floats your boat right? I still like it. xD
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Raine
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Post by Raine on Jun 24, 2008 8:06:16 GMT -5
Eh, I think my head's just messed up to the point everything I speak, write, or draw,seems kind of emoish...
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Post by Jetta on Jun 24, 2008 8:33:57 GMT -5
How depressing does it get?! man, what a depressing world, eh?
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Post by Raine on Jun 24, 2008 9:09:02 GMT -5
I have my latest one...
Unmetephorical demise (sp?) Flying, falling,Dying. Like a bird that has broken it's wings. Surrounded by blackness, everything, Is lost to me now, now that I'm dead. Yet I still watch you, sleeping soundly in your bed. Waiting, watching, studying. For the right moment to appear. And that will make my intentions clear. And you will be stricken with fear. To see me here. Holding a knife behind my back, to bad, for you; your demise wont be a metephor like mine...
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Post by Jetta on Jun 24, 2008 9:21:31 GMT -5
Very deep....
I liked that one too. xD
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Raine
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Post by Raine on Jun 24, 2008 17:48:11 GMT -5
Thank you! I'm working on writeing more, I just need to find some shread of inspiriation. lmao...
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Post by Jetta on Jun 24, 2008 20:02:08 GMT -5
haha, inspiration? Like what? Your cat dying or something? I'm just kidding you! Like what kind of inspiration?
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Post by Raine on Jun 27, 2008 14:10:35 GMT -5
haha, inspiration? Like what? Your cat dying or something? I'm just kidding you! Like what kind of inspiration? The inspiration for my poems usually comes from things I've read, and music I listen to; mixed with real life experences.
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Post by Raine on Jul 9, 2008 12:20:34 GMT -5
Hey Jehte, would you be upset if I put a very..... Emo poem up?
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Post by Jetta on Jul 9, 2008 14:40:44 GMT -5
Go right ahead Raine. ^^
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 2:20:15 GMT -5
<b>The broken doll's suicide</b> This is who I am now. A broken doll. Bound to confinemant, in somewhere unknown. No emotions to call my own. No, not anymore; they're long gone. If someone tries to fix me, I'll end up in shambles... So I lay on the floor, forgotten to all... I begin to dream. And in my dream I jump from heights and fall. I awaken smiling. For the fists time in a long time. For I know how to end this.
*Note* Just for anyone who would care. This is based off of feelings from awhile ago 1-2 months. i've yet to write about my current love... If they want me to I guess i will though...
"He makes me happy when I'm upset." He also MAKES you upset."" "He's SO cute!" So's a puppy. "He's a great listener." So are friends. "I think I'm in love." I think I'm going to be sick... We could argue all day but my answers will remain objections. Because truthfully, I love you; so mabey I'm a bit jealous... But all of my attempts at telling you are worthless...
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Post by Jetta on Jul 10, 2008 7:02:33 GMT -5
Ooh, you were right. That was a pretty depressing peom. It was very nice though! I liked it. : ) Just curious, do you still feel that way?
I like the second one too. I find it interesting.
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 13:26:35 GMT -5
I am not currently suicidal. I don't like the girl anymore.
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