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Post by sythril on Jul 8, 2008 22:14:06 GMT -5
This is my second poem ever written.
Stuck in the past Maybe I am the last This is the end This is where the world begins Something is about to happen Something beyond understanding The riot will start The deaths will begin The elements will strike This is the end This is the end
All the souls will die Only you are left What will you do Your stuck in the past You are the last You hide when it begun You feared for your life You watched your friends Die You watched your family die
You search for others With no luck You see the light You see the escape You will die with the rest You will end it all This is the end
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Post by Raine on Jul 9, 2008 11:47:03 GMT -5
.... That was the single most amazing thing I've ever read.
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Post by Jetta on Jul 9, 2008 14:41:52 GMT -5
Dude.... That was really good.
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Post by sythril on Jul 9, 2008 15:16:20 GMT -5
Aww. Thanks guys. I didn't know if I should post it or not, but I decided what the heck. =\
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Post by Tagg on Jul 9, 2008 15:55:33 GMT -5
Man, you've actually got flippen talent. And that's your second poem? WOW. Do you have your first?
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Post by sythril on Jul 9, 2008 16:42:20 GMT -5
No, I don't it was lost..
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Post by Tagg on Jul 9, 2008 16:43:40 GMT -5
Dangit, that sucks. Was it as good as this one? Have you written any more?
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Post by sythril on Jul 9, 2008 22:59:13 GMT -5
Nopez.. I gotz two. One I happend to write yesterday.
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 2:22:34 GMT -5
Syth, put more up. I'll bribe you to write more.
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Post by Jetta on Jul 10, 2008 6:59:25 GMT -5
Bribe him with what? Just curious....
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 18:53:34 GMT -5
Don't ask. lol...
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Post by sythril on Jul 11, 2008 16:47:08 GMT -5
Maybeh.. Maybeh not.. I won't tell you if I will or will not.
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Post by sythril on Jul 12, 2008 7:27:21 GMT -5
I wrote another one, So I'll post it laterz.
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Post by Jetta on Jul 12, 2008 10:07:23 GMT -5
sweet! how much later? *bounces*
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Post by Raine on Jul 12, 2008 11:44:03 GMT -5
Yay! *Wonders what it's about*
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Post by sythril on Jul 12, 2008 12:27:13 GMT -5
I dunno maybe tonight.
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Post by Raine on Jul 12, 2008 12:48:19 GMT -5
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Post by Tagg on Jul 21, 2008 20:01:09 GMT -5
*is later than tonight*
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Post by sythril on Jul 22, 2008 10:04:13 GMT -5
Sorries I forgets.. maybe I won't post it..
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Post by Raine on Jul 22, 2008 11:23:51 GMT -5
Why???
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