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Post by Jetta on Jul 10, 2008 13:52:22 GMT -5
explain to me the second poem again. If it's about a girl, then why does it say 'him'. It's probably me, having brain issues as usual.
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 14:02:47 GMT -5
It's me and this person talking about her boyfriend.
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Post by Jetta on Jul 10, 2008 14:08:45 GMT -5
Ah, yes. So I am a retard. xD
Love your new banner.
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 14:15:14 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by Jetta on Jul 10, 2008 17:51:34 GMT -5
Any new poems? I love your poems. xD
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 18:52:46 GMT -5
Not yet. I'll get to writeing more soon; I promice.
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 20:11:11 GMT -5
Yay! I wrote a new one! Here you go Jehte.
'The world is falling apart':
Caution, caution! Alarms go off. Guns are fired. Children are shot. Classmates, begin to weep. Parents go into shock. Teachers feel at blame. Everyone else feels the same; As if it hadn't happened... We live in a world. Filled with uncaring beings. We live in a world falling apart at the seams. Where nowone cares, 'til it's their turn to feel loss. The truth is. We're all on the mental boarder. Docters, teachers, even your ownfather. Do you really want to live like this? Let's have the new generation make a difference. So the ones to come, wont have it so hard.
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Post by Tagg on Jul 10, 2008 20:19:44 GMT -5
Dang... I'm like speechless. That was GOOD.
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Post by Raine on Jul 10, 2008 20:23:06 GMT -5
Really? It only took like 5-10 minutes to write...
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Post by Tagg on Jul 21, 2008 20:01:50 GMT -5
Wow. Man, why do some people get all the talent? *highfives*
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Post by Raine on Aug 4, 2008 9:17:37 GMT -5
It just takes a little practice, if you wanted to, you could write worderful poems.
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Post by Tagg on Aug 4, 2008 9:25:21 GMT -5
Haha, so modest as usual. My peoms always sound stupid.
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Post by Raine on Aug 4, 2008 9:27:34 GMT -5
I wouldn't call it modesty, I am being complementry.
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Post by Tagg on Aug 4, 2008 9:43:26 GMT -5
To whom?
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Post by Raine on Aug 5, 2008 21:32:31 GMT -5
You.
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Post by Raine on Aug 22, 2008 22:55:22 GMT -5
New one... Sorry I haven't put any up lately... You're my addiction: You're my poision, my drug, my obsession. What you swore wouldn't happen did. You're the reason for my depression. 'I won't hurt you, trust me.' What you said so many, many times. I wish I could have seen, What you've done to me. You know you're killing me, you act proud. Don't care to hide it. Like you're flaunting my pain aloud. I want you to see. The scars you gave me. They'll never go away. At least that's what the docters say. I want to go back. Back in time. I should have left when I had the chance. For now you're my drug. And the knife is my needle.
And it's killing me.
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Post by Jetta on Aug 22, 2008 23:08:30 GMT -5
That one sounded profesional, good job!! It sounds like a pretty good song too, I liked it. xD
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Post by Raine on Aug 22, 2008 23:11:30 GMT -5
Yeah.... If i turn it into a song i'll let you know.
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Post by Fox on Aug 22, 2008 23:50:35 GMT -5
Good poem! Tell me when you make it a song also
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Post by Raine on Aug 23, 2008 8:32:13 GMT -5
Okay!
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